Hey you guys I think that you did a wonderful
job starting up this country. Mostly everybody is doing good in their life or
have jobs. Although you did a great job I think that there could be some things
that you could have changed or rules you should have made.
Some things that I think you have changed are
how to make a law. I think that you should let the people vote on whether or
not you should have a certain law so it is fair for most of the people. I also
think that you should make a law on how kids act in school. I mean I came from
an elementary school were everybody was respectful to the teachers and to the
other kids. Then when I went into middle school kids were sleeping in class and
talking back to teachers and bullying and they get detention and when that is
over they just do it again. So I think that you should have made a law about
school behavior.
I would now like to tell you some of the
things that I think that you did well. I think that one of the best things that
you did was let us have freedom. I mean if we didn’t have freedom then we would
really be struggling with life. I also think that you did a great job with the
constitution. I mean it is the frame work of the entire country, we basically
live by it and it works for us though.
There are some things that I would like to
ask you. Where did you get the idea of having a president? How long did it take
you to write the constitution? Were there any problems when you finished the
constitution? Those are some of the questions that I would like to ask you.
These are some of the things that I wanted to
tell you and I really wish that you can answer my questions but your dead. If
there was one thing that I would say to you face to face is that you did a
great job founding this country.
Zach I think that you did a very good job at this piece. You had very good word choice and format.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could have done better is work on your sentence starters but other wise great job